We produced a rough draft of our opening which is labelled as 'Rough Cut'. To be perfectly honest at the beginning I really didn't like it as it wasn't exactly what we planned as we made some last minute alterations.
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However there are certain features of the clip so far that I like. Starting at the very beginning, I like the establishing shots that we added as I felt that it sets the scene for the clip and makes it clear to the audience that we are at a train station (hence the signposts). I also like the way that the clips have been edited so that when I am first introduced to the opening, its in between two clips of the train. I think that this specific edit creates a more eery atmosphere and is more appealing to the naked eye. Also, I like the fact that when I am first shown, the camera angle used makes it scarier as it starts with a sort of mid shot and then its a close up with direct eye contact.
There are a few alterations to be made as our opening at this point in time is not exactly perfect. For instance, a few more establishing shots could be added that will help to create a more serene angelic vibe. This will then contrast with the piece of action that is about to take place. In addition, I think that maybe (this is a bit far fetched) we could re-film in perhaps a darker light. This would just add to the vibe in making it more scary, however, as the time is drawing is an end i dont think it will be possible.
Hopefully, once we have proper edited it and polished it up, the clip as a whole will flow more and this will enable us to achieve our best grade possible.
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