Reconstruction To Our Opening

After thinking deeply about our opening, it was brought to our attention that our current opening was too short. Therefor, we have decided to extend our opening by adding in extra clips at the beginning. We have agreed that in order to make it clearer to the audience of why the victim is being killed; we should add a few clips on the killer's childhood. Basically the killer was bullied/excluded by a group of girls so therefore a few years on, she decides to get revenge. We have decided to show the killer as a child where she is being excluded, then we will use a camera effect so that the action will be taken as a photograph. Then it will show that same clip as an actual polaroid in a book. The child (killer) will be flicking through the pages on her bed with evil in her eyes & scribbling out things etc. Then we will flash forward to the killer as a teenager still flicking through the pages so that its clear to the audience that they are the same people. Then it will show the killer (teenager) slam the book shut and then we will have a change in the day of time (from night to day) and then we will go to the original clip of the storyboard in the train station.